Atlas Society misquotes Ayn Rand’s ‘Collectivized “Rights”’ (3)
Misquote: 4 issues found
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Suggested fix
Since only an individual man can possess rights…individual rights” is a redundancy …. But…“collective rights” is a contradiction in terms.
Original text
Since only an individual man can possess rights, the expression “individual rights” is a redundancy (which one has to use for purposes of clarification in today’s intellectual chaos). But the expression “collective rights” is a contradiction in terms.
Quote text
Since only an individual man can possess rights…‘individual rights’ is a redundancy. But…“collective rights” is a contradiction in terms.
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Since‧only‧ an‧ individual‧ man‧ can‧ possess‧ rights ,‧…‘individual‧the‧ expression‧ “ rights ”’‧is‧ a‧ redundancy ‧.‧(which‧ one‧ has‧ to‧ use‧ for‧ purposes‧ of‧ clarification‧ in‧ today’s‧ intellectual‧ chaos) But ‧…“collective‧the‧ expression‧ rights”‧ is‧ a‧ contradiction‧ in‧ terms.
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Notes
I cross-referenced the linked original with the primary source (The Virtue of Selfishness). It’s correct.
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