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and Patience algorithm, underlined in wavy red.
There‧is‧ a‧ fundamental‧ conviction‧ which‧ some‧ people‧ never‧ acquire,‧ some‧ hold‧ only‧ in‧ their‧ youth,‧ and‧ a‧ few‧ hold‧ to‧ the‧ end‧ of‧ their‧ days—the‧ conviction‧ that‧ *ideas‧ matter* .‧In‧. . . .‧one’s‧ youth‧ that‧ conviction‧ is‧ experienced‧ as‧ a‧ self-evident‧ absolute,‧ and‧ one‧ is‧ unable‧ fully‧ to‧ believe‧ that‧ there‧ are‧ people‧ who‧ do‧ not‧ share‧ it. That‧ ideas‧ matter‧ means‧ that‧ knowledge‧ matters,‧ that‧ truth‧ matters,‧ that‧ one’s‧ mind‧ matters .‧And‧. . . .↵ ↵ Its‧the‧ radiance‧ of‧ that‧ certainty,‧ in‧ the‧ process‧ of‧ growing‧ up,‧ is‧ the‧ best‧ aspect‧ of‧ youth. consequence‧ is‧ the‧ inability‧ to‧ believe‧ in‧ the‧ power‧ or‧ the‧ triumph‧ of‧ evil.‧ No‧ matter‧ what‧ corruption‧ one‧ observes‧ in‧ one’s‧ immediate‧ background,‧ one‧ is‧ unable‧ to‧ accept‧ it‧ as‧ normal,‧ permanent‧ or‧ *metaphysically*‧ right.‧ One‧ feels:‧ “This‧ injustice‧ (or‧ terror‧ or‧ falsehood‧ or‧ frustration‧ or‧ pain‧ or‧ agony)‧ is‧ the‧ exception‧ in‧ life,‧ not‧ the‧ rule.”‧ One‧ feels‧ certain‧ that‧ somewhere‧ on‧ earth—even‧ if‧ not‧ anywhere‧ in‧ one’s‧ surroundings‧ or‧ within‧ one’s‧ reach—a‧ proper,‧ human‧ way‧ of‧ life‧ is‧ possible‧ to‧ human‧ beings,‧ and‧ justice‧ matters.
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There‧ |
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× no | Deletions must be indicated, eg by ‘. . . .’ or [replacement]. |
3 |
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✓ yes | Deletion is followed by a valid insertion. |
5 |
. . . . |
✓ yes | Insertion is an ellipsis. |
6 |
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× no | Deletions must be indicated, eg by ‘. . . .’ or [replacement]. |
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✓ yes | Deletion is followed by a valid insertion. |
10 |
. . . . |
✓ yes | Insertion is an ellipsis. |
11 |
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Using four periods in an ellipsis instead of three is unusual. Regardless, there is a difference between indicating an omission at the end of a sentence vs between sentences. Currently, the ellipses indicate that the sentences continue, but they do not – they both end with a period in the original. I’ve added a line break between the two paragraphs in the original (resulting in two line breaks rather than just one) to be charitable as this is arguably a question of style/rendering.
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