Guzey properly quotes Hemmeter et al re rapid effect of sleep deprivation

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The rapid effect of SD on depressive mood within hours is a fascinating experience for the patient, who may have been depressed for weeks or months, and, for the therapist, who still has no conclusive explanation for this rapid relief of depression and, unfortunately, also for the immediate relapse into depression after sleep.
Ulrich-Michael Hemmeter et al, ‘Sleep deprivation in depression’, Expert Rev. Neurother. 10(7), 1109 (2010)

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The rapid effect of SD on depressive mood within hours is a fascinating experience for the patient, who may have been depressed for weeks or months …
Ulrich-Michael Hemmeter et al (ibid), as quoted in: Guzey, A. Matthew Walker’s “Why We Sleep” Is Riddled with Scientific and Factual Errors. Guzey.com. 2019 November. Available from https://guzey.com/books/why-we-sleep/. Bold emphasis removed
Ellipsis used (if any): ‘ …’
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The‧rapid‧effect‧of‧SD‧on‧depressive‧mood‧within‧hours‧is‧a‧fascinating‧experience‧for‧the‧patient,‧who‧may‧have‧been‧depressed‧for‧weeks‧or‧months,‧and,‧for‧the‧therapist,‧who‧still‧has‧no‧conclusive‧explanation‧for‧this‧rapid‧relief‧of‧depression‧and,‧unfortunately,‧also‧for‧the‧immediate‧relapse‧into‧depression‧after‧sleep.‧…

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The‧rapid‧effect‧of‧SD‧on‧depressive‧mood‧within‧hours‧is‧a‧fascinating‧experience‧for‧the‧patient,‧who‧may‧have‧been‧depressed‧for‧weeks‧or‧months
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,‧and,‧for‧the‧therapist,‧who‧still‧has‧no‧conclusive‧explanation‧for‧this‧rapid‧relief‧of‧depression‧and,‧unfortunately,‧also‧for‧the‧immediate‧relapse‧into‧depression‧after‧sleep.
 ✓ yes Deletion is followed by a valid insertion.
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‧…
 ✓ yes Insertion is an ellipsis.

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