Guzey properly quotes Walker re genetic disorder

In-house rules Nov 01, 2024 · By Dennis Hackethal · Forked from Guzey misquotes Walker re sleep of every species

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First, there is a very rare genetic disorder that starts with a progressive insomnia, emerging in midlife. Several months into the disease course, the patient stops sleeping altogether. By this stage, they have started to lose many basic brain and body functions. No drugs that we currently have will help the patient sleep. After twelve to eighteen months of no sleep, the patient will die. Though exceedingly rare, this disorder asserts that a lack of sleep can kill a human being.

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[T]here is a very rare genetic disorder that starts with a progressive insomnia, emerging in midlife [fatal familial insomnia (FFI)]. Several months into the disease course, the patient stops sleeping altogether. By this stage, they have started to lose many basic brain and body functions. No drugs that we currently have will help the patient sleep. After twelve to eighteen months of no sleep, the patient will die. Though exceedingly rare, this disorder asserts that a lack of sleep can kill a human being.

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First,‧t[T]here‧is‧a‧very‧rare‧genetic‧disorder‧that‧starts‧with‧a‧progressive‧insomnia,‧emerging‧in‧midlife‧[fatal‧familial‧insomnia‧(FFI)].‧Several‧months‧into‧the‧disease‧course,‧the‧patient‧stops‧sleeping‧altogether.‧By‧this‧stage,‧they‧have‧started‧to‧lose‧many‧basic‧brain‧and‧body‧functions.‧No‧drugs‧that‧we‧currently‧have‧will‧help‧the‧patient‧sleep.‧After‧twelve‧to‧eighteen‧months‧of‧no‧sleep,‧the‧patient‧will‧die.‧Though‧exceedingly‧rare,‧this‧disorder‧asserts‧that‧a‧lack‧of‧sleep‧can‧kill‧a‧human‧being.

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3	here‧is‧a‧very‧rare‧genetic‧disorder‧that‧starts‧with‧a‧progressive‧insomnia,‧emerging‧in‧midlife
4	‧[fatal‧familial‧insomnia‧(FFI)]	✓ yes	Insertion is properly bracketed.
5	.‧Several‧months‧into‧the‧disease‧course,‧the‧patient‧stops‧sleeping‧altogether.‧By‧this‧stage,‧they‧have‧started‧to‧lose‧many‧basic‧brain‧and‧body‧functions.‧No‧drugs‧that‧we‧currently‧have‧will‧help‧the‧patient‧sleep.‧After‧twelve‧to‧eighteen‧months‧of‧no‧sleep,‧the‧patient‧will‧die.‧Though‧exceedingly‧rare,‧this‧disorder‧asserts‧that‧a‧lack‧of‧sleep‧can‧kill‧a‧human‧being.

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