Walker Scribd vs Walker Kindle re deepening depression

In-house rules Nov 01, 2024 · By Dennis Hackethal · Forked from Walker Scribd vs Walker Kindle re percentage “after a night without sleep”

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The reason sleep deprivation is not a commonly used treatment, however, is [that] as soon as these individuals do sleep, the antidepressant benefit [typically] goes away. [...] As a result, sleep deprivation [alone] is not a realistic or comprehensive therapy option.

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The reason sleep deprivation is not a commonly used treatment, however, is twofold. First, as soon as these individuals do sleep, the antidepressant benefit goes away. Second, the 60 to 70 percent of patients who do not respond to the sleep deprivation will actually feel worse, deepening their depression. As a result, sleep deprivation is not a realistic or comprehensive therapy option.

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The reason sleep deprivation is not a commonly used treatment, however, is that as soon as these individuals do sleep, the antidepressant benefit typically goes away. As a result, sleep deprivation alone is not a realistic or comprehensive therapy option.

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The‧reason‧sleep‧deprivation‧is‧not‧a‧commonly‧used‧treatment,‧however,‧is‧twofold.‧First,‧that‧as‧soon‧as‧these‧individuals‧do‧sleep,‧the‧antidepressant‧benefit‧typically‧goes‧away.‧Second,‧the‧60‧to‧70‧percent‧of‧patients‧who‧do‧not‧respond‧to‧the‧sleep‧deprivation‧will‧actually‧feel‧worse,‧deepening‧their‧depression.‧As‧a‧result,‧sleep‧deprivation‧alone‧is‧not‧a‧realistic‧or‧comprehensive‧therapy‧option.

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1	The‧reason‧sleep‧deprivation‧is‧not‧a‧commonly‧used‧treatment,‧however,‧is‧
2	~~twofold.‧First,‧~~	× no	Deletions must be indicated, eg by ‘[...]’ or [replacement].
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4	as‧soon‧as‧these‧individuals‧do‧sleep,‧the‧antidepressant‧benefit‧
5	typically‧	× no	Insertions must be surrounded by [brackets].
6	goes‧away.‧
7	~~Second,‧the‧60‧to‧70‧percent‧of‧patients‧who‧do‧not‧respond‧to‧the‧sleep‧deprivation‧will‧actually‧feel‧worse,‧deepening‧their‧depression.‧~~	× no	Deletions must be indicated, eg by ‘[...]’ or [replacement].
8	As‧a‧result,‧sleep‧deprivation‧
9	alone‧	× no	Insertions must be surrounded by [brackets].
10	is‧not‧a‧realistic‧or‧comprehensive‧therapy‧option.

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